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5202-考研英语考前30天狂背作文-第8部分
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点评：
该文共分四段。第一段还是采用先描写图画表层表现的打斗场面，而后再进一步引出本文的主题——新生的平价药店受到各方打压。
第二段写了药价过高的现象及其原因。主要原因就是药店流通环节过多，层层加价，给居民带来了巨大的负担。
第三段先写了平价药店的诞生改变了当前的局面。之后写了它们激怒了利益受损的各方，其中有销售商、传统药店、医院和一些药厂。当它们群起攻之时，新的平价药店的生存就受到了威胁。
第四段写政府应当扶植这些平价药店，并改革药品流通和整个医疗体系。最后进一步说，当我们首先考虑普通大众的利益时，和谐社会的构建就不是难事了。
心得：
这篇文章涉及的话题比较难写，我们如果对此问题并不是非常熟悉，就不必深入去写，因为考察的重点是语言，这一点大家切记。
下面来看一些重点的词和词组。
首段首句中的condemn意即“声讨”。次句中的crouch表示“蜷缩”。第三句中的evoke表示“激起”。
第二段中的drug circulation意思是“药品流通”。
第三段第二句中flow的意思是“流通”，the cost of management表示“管理成本”。第三句中的irritate表示“激怒”。末句的at risk表示“受到威胁”。
末段首句的endeavor表示“努力”，后接不定式。次句中的give priority to表示“优先考虑”，harmonious society表示“和谐社会”。
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祝贺信1
结构要点：
祝贺信是由于某种原因向收信人道贺的信件，一般包含三个部分：
1． 点明要祝贺的事情，并向对方道贺；
2． 详述祝贺的事情；
3． 再次祝贺。
Directions 11
Suppose your friend Ellen is going to graduate from Fudan University and get a Masters Degree。 Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulate her。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using Li Ming instead。
Sample：
Dear Ellen；
How delighted I am when I hear that you are going to graduate from Fudan University and get a Master’s Degree！ Though I cannot go to Shanghai to join in the celebration of your graduation owing to the long distance between the two cities； yet I wish to express my most earnest and ardent congratulations through this letter。
For years you have made unremitting efforts in your specialized field and your diligence and intelligence at last win you honor。 I am not only happy for but also proud of you from the bottom of my heart。
I believe as an upanding person； you will use your head and hands to develop your career to a higher level after the graduation。
May you achieve greater success in the future。
Yours sincerely；
Li Ming
祝贺信2
语言注意点：
祝贺信除了向对方道贺以外，还可表达祝福、期望等。语言应热情洋溢，满怀喜悦。
Directions 12
Suppose your friend Mr。 Zhao has recently got a promotion。 Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulate him。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using Li Ming instead。
Sample：
Dear Mr。 Zhao；
I am extremely glad to hear that you have got a promotion in your pany。 Congratulations！
It is excellent of you to get a promotion； for after all you have just been in the pany for six months。 As we all know； you are always a both hardworking and creative person； which is essential to achieve your goals in work。 Moreover； your strong sense of responsibility enables you to win trust from people around you and thus win yourself various opportunities。 I think that is why you can make achievements in such a short time。
There is no doubt that you deserve the promotion。 Having you as a friend； I really feel both proud and lucky because I can often learn so much from you。
Best wishes。
Yours faithfully；
Li Ming
邀请信1
结构要点：
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，包含三个方面：
1． 邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点；
2． 与该活动有关的注意事项；
3． 期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢。
Directions 13
Write a letter to one of your high school classmates who is in a nearby city； and invite him/her to your city at this weekend。 Some necessary details must be included。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using “Li Ming” instead。
Sample：
Dear Linda；
We haven’t seen each other for six years after graduation。 I am so glad to hear that you have graduated from UCLA and e back to work in Suzhou。 If you are free this Saturday； please e to Shanghai and have a good time with me。
We can first go to the Century Park； where the flowers are all in blossom。 Let’s go boating on the lake —isn’t it pleasant in the cool breeze？ Then I will treat you to dinner at a western restaurant on Huaihai Road—it is small but really nice—I’m sure you will enjoy it。 After dinner； let’s go to a concert—you are a music lover； aren’t you？
If you couldn’t e； please notify me before Friday。 If you can； please tell me which train you will take and I will meet you at the railway station。
I am looking forward to meeting you。
Sincerely yours；
Li Ming
邀请信2
语言注意点：
邀请信叙事一定要清楚、明白。如写给朋友，可选用活泼、真诚的言辞；如写给长辈、上级、名人等，则语言应正式、礼貌。
Directions 14
Write a letter to invite a famous professor to give a lecture to the English postgraduate students in your university。 Some necessary details must be included。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using “Li Ming” instead。
Sample：
Dear Professor Michael Hutchison；
We are very glad to hear that you are attending an international conference in Beijing。 We are writing this letter to inquiry the possibility of inviting you to deliver a lecture on American literature for our postgraduate students on the evening of June 16。
We have long been noticed that you have done a lot of substantial and creative work in this field。 Two of your books have bee textbooks for our students for several years。 So all of us believe your lecture will benefit our students and teaching staff alike。
If you can manage to e； please tell us the number of your flight and we will meet you at the airport。 If you can’t make it； please also let us know。
We are looking forward to your ing。
Sincerely yours；
Li Ming
投诉信1
结构要点：
投诉信是对产品或服务表示不满的信件，一般分三个部分：
1． 提出投诉内容；
2． 说明具体情况；
3． 提出解决办法。
Directions 15
Suppose that you ordered a television but later found that it has worrying problems。 Write a letter of plaint to describe the matter and require settlement。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using “Li Ming” instead。
Sample：
Dear Sir；
The television I ordered from your store arrived on time last Friday； but only three days later I found it could not work properly。
On Tuesday evening； when I turned on the television； I was surprised to find that it became a blackandwhite television—all of the other colors were simply gone。 What made matters worse； the remote control was also out of order。 I dialed your service number for several times； but the line was always busy。
This problem has affected our normal life。 Can you get it repaired as soon as possible？ Thank you for your consideration。
I am looking forward to your early reply。
Yours faithfully；
Li Ming
投诉信2
语言注意点：
投诉信应重点表明投诉的原因，叙事应客观、准确、简洁。最后提出的解决方法应切实可行。在表达自己的不满时，语言要把握分寸，不失风度。
Directions 16
Write a letter to plain about an unhappy experience in about 100 words to describe the matter and ask for the mistake to be corrected。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using “Li Ming” instead。
Sample：
Dear Sir；
I am writing to you about a most unhappy experience。 Last Tuesday morning； we took a longroute bus of your pany from Dukou to Lijiang。 The bus was scheduled to arrive in Lijiang at 7 o’clock in the evening； but it stopped midway at four p。m。 for mechanical problems。 The driver and the ticket seller could neither solve the problem by themselves nor seek help from others。
Where we stopped was nowhere near a village。 Up until 8 o’clock； another bus finally carried us to a shabby rural motel。 We had to pay for our acmodation。 The room was too small and the quilt was so dirty。 To our surprise； when we just managed to sleep at around 2 a。m。； the driver came to wake us up—the bus had been fixed！
I suggest that you look into this matter immediately and deal with it quickly and properly。
Looking forward to your reply。
Yours；
Li Ming
询问信1
结构要点：
询问信是希望获取信息的信件，分为三个部分：
1． 说明自己的计划或目的，也就是询问信息的原因；
2． 征询具体信息；
3． 期待回复并表示感谢。
Directions 17
Write a letter inquiring about a hotel。 Some necessary details must be included。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using “Li Ming” instead。
Sample：
Dear Mr。 Guo；
I am going to visit Songpan on July 30 and wish to stay at your hotel。 My friend has just e back and warmly remended it to me。
My wife and I want to go horse trekking with the Happy Trails Horse Team。 We will choose to go to the Ice Mountain； so it will take four days。 We want a double room with a private bath for two nights； July 30 and August 3。
Would you please tell us whether we could have such a room and h
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